The City of Angels, the Story I wrote!!!

Over the past few days, I’ve been writing a story called the City of Angels. (Here is a little of what it is about…) The City of Angels is where people are Okayed or denied passage into Heaven. So in order for someone to get into heaven they must be put on trial in front of the Court of God to verify that their journey has ended or that their journey has not ended and that they need to be sent back to earth. Trials can go for days on end so many people have to wait for their trial and the longer someone waits the more like an angel they become and appear. If someone fully becomes an angel they are sent to guard the Gateway of God, or the entrance to the City of Angels. So at the beginning of the story a man passes away at a hospital. He ends up attending his funeral and burial and he then can’t decide what to do so he glides out and over the ocean. Sometime during the night he passes into Heaven and meets an Angel named Roger who shows him inside the City of Angels. He then starts his exploration of the city and the venture to the Court of God.


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